In the realm of wit
Lies the staggering bit,
Too easy to be heard
Disarming the senses,
The woods, the streams, the thick trees all
Tickle in intrigue to guise the hill
Which they say is home to unknown
A story burried that stumbles and shreiks in pain
The stars shine brighter
The water holds its breath
Trees turn their faces as cowards
Melancholic of this voyage of the faithful
The truth is far beyond whats written
Not everyone can hear
Nor anyone can bear
The truth shall spare whats been despair
The clouds steal light from the stars
Who shrink in humility
Questioning infinity!
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Very nice!
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Thanks π
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You do have talet.
Take care.
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Hey thanks! U knw i was nervous while uploading cauze it happens to be my first ever piece written 2 years back.
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Talent.
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Wow! And yeah, its only gotta be in the realm of wits that trees be as cowards, turning their faces away and water’s got breath! ππ
Your use of imageries I find pretty astonishing and enriching too! Way to go….coolness! ππππ
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Hey thankyou! U have no idea what it means to me. I’m flattered π
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Hehehe. And you SOOO should be too…you more than brought this…for sure! This is me just saying it as it is! ππ
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Haha this is so nice of ya ππ
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Very cool π nothing to be nervous about! Keep rocking like this! πππ
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Thanks much! I’m humbled π
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Honor to whom honor is due!
Well deserved friend! π
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ππ
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honestly, for your first piece, this is amazing work. Mine was just a bunch of words which happen to rhyme π. Well done!
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Thankyou! Its a big compliment π
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I enjoyed your story, liked how it was written in a poem!
I wanted to stop by and thank you for following my blog.
Fim
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Thankyou very much! My pleasure always π
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Reblogged this on wwwpalfitness.
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Thankyou π
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You’re Welcome:)
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Lovely poem!
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Thankyou π
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Very well composed. π
I have got something to make you smile about.
I have nominated you to 3 Day 3 Quote Challenge.
Should you choose to accept it?
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Phew. Ah.
Hereβs the link. Thank me later.
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Hey thanks for ur appreciation π just read it so i guess i’m late.
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Pleasure all mine.
Better late, than never. Do accept my nomination then. π
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It’s really a lovely piece! Thank you for following my blog.
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Thankyou! Pleasure π
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Beautiful poem! Thanks for following my blog! I’m following yours as well! π
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Thankyou. Pleasure π
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Beautiful. Thank you for the blog follow too π
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Thank you π n pleasure.
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Wonderful
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Thanks loads π
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My pleasure
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Beautifully written, there’s sadness and mystery on your poem. I very much enjoyed reading it. Well done! Thank you for following my blog, sorry if I am late to visit yours, I have been busy so I missed a lot of good posts of wonderful bloggers here like you. π Keep up the good work! π
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Thank you for ur extra kind words! I’m humbled π
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This gives such wonderful emotion. Thank you for creating and sharing it.
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Thankyou! I’m humbled π
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Beautiful!!
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Thankyou stephanae! π
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You’re welcome Fawad! Have a wonderful day!
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U too π
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Very well written! π
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Thankyou β€
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Beautifully pennedππ
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This is amazing! Beautifully penned! π
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Thanks much shambhavi!
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You’re welcome Fawad! Quite an interesting blog you’ve got! π
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it owes me…
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Very nice β€ β€
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